suchapromise种种承诺
whenifirstlookatthecartoon,ican’thelplaughingatthehenwhoseemstobeseriouslymakingafoolishannouncementtothepublicthatshealwayslayseggs,smoothandroundandneverwithouteggwhiteandyolkinsidetheshell.however,whenistarttostudythecartoonmorecarefully,ifindsomethingsignificantinitandgraduallyicometounderstandtheauthor’sintention.
nowadays,almostalltradesandprofessionsarerepeatedlymakingsincerepromisestopeople:governmentpeopleassurethattheyarenobleandcleanandwillservepeopleheartandsoulmerchantssmilinglyswearthattheproductstheysellareofsuperiorquality,genuineinsteadoffalse,life-timemaintenanceguaranteedandthecheapestmarketprice;advertiserstakepainstorecommendmiracledrugsandmake-youbeautifulcosmetics,etc.yearafteryear,suchpromisesarerepeated.iwonderwhytheytakesomuchtroubletoboastoudlyabouttheirobligationsandduties.peoplebelievedthematfirst,butgraduallybecameawakenedbecausetheyhavefoundsomedishonestyinsuchbombingpromises.
“actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”thehenisfoolishenoughtomakeheregg-promise,whyshouldn’tthosenonsense-makersbecomecleverer?
cet6六级作文结构分析：
·paragraph1—
*interpretationofthecartoon
*myunderstanding
·paragraph2—
*promisesmadebyalltradesandprofessions
*awakeningofthepeople
·paragraph3—
*“actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”
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cet6六级作文内容分析：
本文是一篇漫画作文,画的寓意是“各行各业的种种承诺本应是自身的职责,却要大肆渲染,无疑是多此一举”,其愚蠢程度不亚于图中“母鸡下蛋的承诺”。这类题型必须把握其寓意(hiddenmeaning),方能切中主题。本文第一段用两句解释了漫画,其开头不落俗套,文笔幽默。第二段切入主题,例举各种“多此一举”的承诺,笔调生动,最后一句是有力的揭露。结尾段中引用了一句成语并奉劝承诺者不要像母鸡那样愚蠢本题曾是一次考研写作题,漫画取自于21世纪报,作者借题自行撰文。
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cet6六级作文万能句型：
cartoonn.漫画
can’thelp+-ing禁不住
layeggs下蛋
eggwhiten.蛋白
yolkn.蛋黄
alltradesandprofessions各行各业
servepeopleheartandsoul全心全意为人民服务
swearv.发誓
superiorquality优质
genuineinsteadoffalse真货而不是假货
life-timemaintenanceguaranteed保证终身维修
takepainsto+v.费尽心思去
miracledrugs神药
make-you-beautifulcosmetics“使你美”化妆品
yearafteryear年复一年
boastabout吹嘘
obligationn.责职,义务
dishonestyinsuchbombingpromises轰炸性的承诺中的欺骗
actionsspeaklouderthanwords.听其言更要观其行
nonsense-makers说废话者
TheMostUnforgettablePersonIEverknew
(1)我生活中最难以忘怀的人是……(2)为什么他(或她)一直在我心中(3)结论
InmylifeIhavemetmanypeoplewhoarereallyworthmyrecalling.ButperhapsthemostunforgettablepersonIeverknewismyChineselanguageteacher.
Whatfrequentlybringsbackmemoriesofmyschoolteacherishisspecialqualities.Firstofall,Iwasattractedbyhislivelywit.Irememberwealwayslongforhisclasswithgreateagernessbecausehislecturewerehumorouslydelivered,neverfailingtoprovokeloudlaughs.Second,hegaveusthegreatestgiftateachercanoffer--anawakeningofapassionforlearning.HenotonlyledustoanappreciationofthebeautyandperfectionofChineseandliterature,butalsoarousedourgreatinterestinexploringsomethingdeeperinthisfield.Finally,Iwasdeeplyimpressedbytherespectheshowedforus,forhetreateduslikefriendsratherthanstudents.
Althoughitisnearly10yearssinceIattendedhislastclass,heisthetalkofouroldclassmates,andIknowpartofhimhasalreadystayedinmyheart.
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